An inncodent backstage

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An inncodent backstage

Post  Jushin Liger on Thu 06 Aug 2009, 11:45 pm

Jr Dillon: Well that was a great match and I beliv....

Rh Gavrin: Sorry to cut you off Jr but I'm getting word that there a fight backstage between newcomer Jushin Liger and Static.
Can we get a camera back there?

*the camera cuts to the backstage with Jushin Liger and Static brawling backstage and ppl tring to seperate them. And Jushin starts walking away and Static breaks free and jumps on him and they start up again and Jushin gets up and grabs the camera they are watching the fight with and breaks it over Statics head and the feed cuts there*

Rh Gavrin: Wow well that was brutal

Jr Dillon: Ya and those 2 are facing each other for a spot in the tournament coming up so it will be interesting how that will go


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Re: An inncodent backstage

Post  zullo on Thu 06 Aug 2009, 11:50 pm

kfirst thing, colour the commentators anmes, next, instead of using the colour red put * * around it, double space your rp, check for spelling, and dont use "and" too much
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Re: An inncodent backstage

Post  Ditlefsen on Fri 07 Aug 2009, 12:58 am

I thought it was really neat Jushin, nice one mate!

Perhaps we can cook something up together in the future cheers

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